At the last line of this first part, my hand clasped over my mouth and a sob escaped me. A shaky, obnoxiously loud sob. A few tears followed shortly after, but I have since composed myself and I am now ready to praise you!!
I cannot describe to you how much I love your writing. Your characterization is 100% SPOT ON, and everything is perfect. I cannot believe how fantastic you are at writing Fredrick! It's so, so very true to the script and to the way Daniel portrayed him. It's like, Fredrick, but a closer look. Fredrick as if we were given the priviledge of seeing him open up more on screen. It's so, SO wonderful and you absolutely nailed him. Fidgeting with his cap, his constant optimism... It's breathtaking, really.
The same goes for Shosanna - you've got her down pat, as well. Her thoughts, the way she composes herself... it's all so completely perfect.
Good God, if only this had happened. And once again, who is to say it didn't?
Her inner thoughts are killing me - they are exactly what I have always wanted her to be thinking, and they are exactly what she must have been thinking. Ugh, I don't even know what to say, this is all so perfect.
Fredrick is breaking my heart. Good God, I love you.
I LOVE YOU FOR THIS SO MUCH. I know it's going to take me a while to read, as I'm going to be savouring it... but I cannot wait for what lies ahead.
I am so, so grateful for this. It is truly magnificent.
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I cannot describe to you how much I love your writing. Your characterization is 100% SPOT ON, and everything is perfect. I cannot believe how fantastic you are at writing Fredrick! It's so, so very true to the script and to the way Daniel portrayed him. It's like, Fredrick, but a closer look. Fredrick as if we were given the priviledge of seeing him open up more on screen. It's so, SO wonderful and you absolutely nailed him. Fidgeting with his cap, his constant optimism... It's breathtaking, really.
The same goes for Shosanna - you've got her down pat, as well. Her thoughts, the way she composes herself... it's all so completely perfect.
Good God, if only this had happened. And once again, who is to say it didn't?
Her inner thoughts are killing me - they are exactly what I have always wanted her to be thinking, and they are exactly what she must have been thinking. Ugh, I don't even know what to say, this is all so perfect.
Fredrick is breaking my heart. Good God, I love you.
I LOVE YOU FOR THIS SO MUCH.
I know it's going to take me a while to read, as I'm going to be savouring it... but I cannot wait for what lies ahead.
I am so, so grateful for this. It is truly magnificent.
A thousand times bravo.
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