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dying does not meet my expectations
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precluded.livejournal.com) wrote on August 1st, 2011 at 07:25 am
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You successfully highlighted those two important aspects and her scenes with Manfried are beautiful. I like how you kind of gave them away in glimpses -- imagining it all with a violin playing in the background is just glorious.