I'll go first :D

You can't imagine how welcome this was in my chaos of a life right now. It was just what I needed (since this is the only Mel/Dan baby-makin' process we get for now), and I'm so glad you're continuing the story ^_^
A few things:
I probably have that German phrase memorized by now for re-reading the chapter. German-speaking Fred is always love.
Poor Babette. I'm suprised she didn't tell on them, though.
I love the new layout.
But I love the Iggy and Tom .gif you used more. Probably my favourite part of Coffee and Cigarettes.

I'll shut up now.